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Tear my heart from my soul,
Listen to all the lies that I've been told.
Watch me crumble, watch me fold,
Watch me die, alone and cold.

Leave me here and let me go,
You have hit rock bottom, so cruel and low.
All you do is just for show,
Your soul is as dark and black like crows.

The stinging, sharp pain,
What you do is only drain.
I am free and could not be tamed,
My mind goes wild, you've driven me insane.

The touch of grass beneath my feet,
The warmth of the strong sun's heat.
The love before I can not keep,
All I feel is the cold of the street.

My body grows weak,
My mind begins to creak.
I no longer hear the eagles shriek,
I no longer hold the freedom that I seek.

On my knees I fall into the abyss,
I lose the sight of all the bliss.
How could people amount to this?
How could they not want to feel a gentle kiss?

Life for me has take it's course,
It has taken my heart and soul by force.
Humans like this show no remorse,
How could they do this to a free spirit horse?
©2008-2009 ~DarkMustangSoul
:icondarkmustangsoul:

Author's Comments

Poem I made in my class. It's about a wild horse that gets captured and they put him to work in a disgusting street pulling a wagon. Kinda how i feel. It has no name so I'm open for suggestions...

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:iconblazesnbreezes:
Wow, beautiful lines put together in this, it's all so nice when you read straight through. I thought it was a person at first, but then that last line surprises you in a way that almost gives it a double meaning. Love it, even if it is a sorrow poem =)

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:pie: :chainsaw: WHY DO YOU MOCK ME PIE!?!?!!!?!! OM NOM NOM
:icondarkmustangsoul:
Thanks so much :icongwomp:

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:iconstarlightspoint7:
Wow! I'm speechless! That was a wonderful poem! :hug:

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:icondarkmustangsoul:
Thanks. And thanks so much for the fav.

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"Why can't you look at me now? I hope you like what you've done to me. Drown in your misery."
<<[Mushroomhead]>>
:iconblobofgoo:
Wow, that is beautiful *faves*

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Love's for fools wise enough to take a chance.
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:iconstarlightspoint7:
You're welcome!!

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"Life is a balance of holding on and letting go."
"Believe in yourself - that's all it takes." - Keith Urban

Visit my stock account here ~Imaginationstock
:icondarkmustangsoul:
Thank you so very much :hug:

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"Why can't you look at me now? I hope you like what you've done to me. Drown in your misery."
<<[Mushroomhead]>>

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